My Family: A Foodie Poem By My 10-Year Old

My Family: A Foodie Poem By My 10-Year Old

By Schoen Amidor

Here’s a poem my son wrote for his 5th grade class comparing his family to a restaurant. He is my budding foodie poet and let me tell you, this poem will really hit home for many of you!

My Family

My family is like a restaurant.
My sisters are the customers always complaining.
My mom is the chef working all the time.
My dad is the manager checking everything twice.
I am the waiter giving out everything.
My family is like a restaurant always 24/7.

 

Please leave notes of encouragement for my son, Schoen. I would love him to continue to write food blogs for me from a 10-year old’s perspective and have been asking him to do so for a while.

10 Comments
  • Deanna Segrave-Daly
    Posted at 08:41h, 09 January Reply

    Schoen – I really like your poem – I can just picture your kitchen! I hope you write more and share on your mom’s blog again.

  • Nicole
    Posted at 08:49h, 09 January Reply

    Schoen – what an awesome poem !! You are a talented writer like your mommy 🙂
    Nicole xo

  • Rebecca @RUtheMOMof
    Posted at 08:50h, 09 January Reply

    What a great poem if Schoen doesn’t mind I would love to make a copy and put it in my kitchen. I look forward to more poems by Schoen. BRAVO !!!!

  • Ben
    Posted at 08:52h, 09 January Reply

    Wow shoen, great poem! Knowing you I can say this is a very genuine poem. True to real life. Your a good writter and of course have such a great heart. The waiter amongst your siblings so to speak.

  • Zippy
    Posted at 09:08h, 09 January Reply

    I loved your food poem and you are so right about your family, you forgot your Safta’s (grandmother) role in your 24/7 restaurant what would it be?

  • Chelsea
    Posted at 21:19h, 09 January Reply

    Great job writing this poem Schoen! I love seeing your creative side come out in your writing! 🙂

  • Stephanie Pinto
    Posted at 22:01h, 09 January Reply

    Schoen, you did a fantastic job on your poem! Keep up the great work:)

  • Jacob.b
    Posted at 07:46h, 10 January Reply

    Nice job

  • Jordy and Bela
    Posted at 11:26h, 12 January Reply

    Hi schoen good job on your poem!

  • TAMARA :)
    Posted at 22:30h, 01 April Reply

    that is so good, can I copy it, only joking !!!!

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